“It’s a great fixer-upper…perfect for newlyweds,” the realtor chimed as I scribbled my signature.
With naivety and honeymoon smiles, my husband and I gazed at the crumbling castle that we vowed to make our kingdom.
Only two weeks later, I came home with paint and paste to find him drilling something other than the floorboards.
There comes a point when you can only repair something so much.
Despite his praying and pleading, I knew there was no way to restore this to its original beauty.
No more wasting time with tools.
With gasoline and a lighter, I make my final improvement.
I truly appreciate you taking the time to read my contribution to this week’s Friday Fictioneers, hosted by the magnificent Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. I’ll keep this short, because I’m sure you have better things to do than read my blabbering- like checking out some other stories from fellow fictioneers!
Eternally grateful for your love and support,
Adelie
He should have known the drill… but I guess he didn’t get it until he’s burned..
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*applauds* Nice one, Bjorn! Thank you so much for reading and sharing your genius!
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Burn it all and start anew, That’s alright I suppose 🙂
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I think it’s a rather healthy coping mechanism, Andy. I don’t think you’ve really lived until you’ve set a few things on fire! 😉
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Hmmm, hope they escaped before she lit the gasoline.
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I debated whether or not to specify if anyone was left in that house. I thought it might be more fun to let the reader decide! Thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to share your thoughts, Melody!
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Loved this!!! I hope she paints the town red. 😉
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Thank you so much for reading and writing such kind words. Yes, I have a feeling she’s just getting started! 😀
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Some nice lines here… I liked the way she kind of matter-of-factly said ‘drilling something other than the floorboards’… kind of a noir vibe. I liked the ‘vowing to make castle a kingdom’ line too.
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Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts, Ted. It’s funny, because this character’s point-of-view is a lot more amusing than mine. It’s crazy how those things happen. 🙂
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Naivety and honeymoon smiles – love your phrasing.
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Thank you so much. I’m not sure where her matter-of-fact voice came from, but I’m really glad you liked it! 🙂
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I did 🙂
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Love the matter-of-fact tone of this, Adelie, and the metaphors work perfectly. Just a grammar thing: “I knew there’s no way…”, you’ve been in past tense so “I knew there was no way” (yes, I know it effects word count, but…). The ending, although in present tense, could stay that way because she could be talking right now. Deftly done.
janet
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Hello, Janet! Thank you so much for the grammar tip. I contemplated that whole there’s past tense situation, and for some reason, I kept it— not quite sure what my reasoning was at that point. I really appreciate you reading and taking the time to give me advice!
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Hmm interesting! What was he drilling?
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Hah…..I think you know 😛
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The professor is horribly dull, you know
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Not at all! The professor is many things- dull is not one of them!
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Oh very noir! I shall think the worst… I prefer it that way. 🙂 Well done.
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Thank you so much for reading, Sandra. Yes, I was implying the worst- Glad we’re on the same page! 😀
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Young and restless, light the fire first, think about it later. You delivered, again!
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I really appreciate you reading and reflecting on it! I agree, arson isn’t always the best solution! 🙂
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Some fab lines in this, loved the dark humour woven through it 🙂
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Thank you so very much for reading. It’s amazing what darkness has stemmed from this photo prompt!
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Bravo. Hope the marriage didn’t also go up in flames. Unless ‘drilling’ is a euphemism. In which case, double bravo.
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I really appreciate the bravos! The drilling was indeed, a euphemism. Suffice it to say the *ex* husband is left with nothing but his tool. 🙂
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Sometimes a well-placed match is just what you need! 😉 Nice story.
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Isn’t that the truth! 😀 Thanks so much for reading and for the kind words!
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A gal after my own heart… Loved it!
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Thank you so very much for reading and the sweet words, hugmamma! 🙂
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Clever and brilliantly written, Adelie. I love the multiple meanings of your carefully chosen words.
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Karen, thank you so much for reading and for writing such kind feedback! It really brightened my morning! 🙂
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Loved it! ‘drilling something other than the floorboards’ – what a great line! You’ve managed to achieve funny, sad and determination in one story. Fab 🙂
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Thank you so much for taking the time to leave such magnificent feedback, elappleby. I wasn’t quite sure what tone I was aiming for at first, so I just let the story go witnessed where it wandered. I figured it was best for her to find the strength to move on, and I’m glad I was able to get a few laughs out of it. Thanks again! 🙂
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I’m not sure I want to know what else he was drilling… dark and delicious, Adelie.
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Thank you so very much for reading and sharing your thoughts! Yes, I tried to leave out as much detail as possible so that readers could let their imaginations fill in the gap. 🙂
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With naivety and honeymoon smiles What a glorious line – so naïve then “BOOM” ! Great story.
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Thank you SO much for reading and leaving the wonderful feedback, Alicia! I’m glad you enjoyed my little twist!
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Adelie, Good and well-written story. Well, I guess that was the end of more than one thing. Well done. 🙂 —Susan
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Susan, thank you so much for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts. I suppose a lot of my stories are running along the theme of fresh starts! 🙂
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Dear Adelie, I really enjoyed your story. Was the husband being unfaithful or he really was drilling on something else. If the former, I wonder if she let him know before she threw the match. Wow – short honeymoon! Nan 🙂
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Hello, Nan! As you imagined, the husband was being unfaithful. I thought about stating whether or not he was in the house when she set it on fire, but I decided to leave it to the readers’ imaginations! 😀
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Loved this! What a punch in the gut! 🙂
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Hah, thank you! I’m glad I was able to strike a good balance between humor, hurt, and revenge. Your comment really made my day! 🙂
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Good, I’m glad! 🙂
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Naughty naughty…but oooh so entertaining! I love your metaphors and you have some phrases that are on point as well! Well done as usual!
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I really appreciate your lovely feedback, and I’m glad I could amuse and entertain. Writing this was quite fun, and I’m glad it was a fun read! 🙂
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Yes, you have a flair for Sci Fi and pseudo-erotica :D…I say…explore! lol 🙂
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lol, that’s an interesting combo of genres. I’ll take your advice! 😀
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Whooo yeah…I would LOVE to read something that comprises elements of both genres! 😀 lol
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Ha ha ha. Something I woulda done. Know when it’s over! =) Thx for the follow. Glad to have met.
Diana
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Hello, Diana! Thank you so much for reading this! I’m really glad you enjoyed my piece. It was very fun to write! 🙂
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