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Blankets of tears slam against the window,
Alabaster clouds weep for me.
No barrier between man and nature,
We’re the same suffering being.
The sun shimmers behind brooding captors,
pleading for a softening smile.
I turn away, clutching a silver blade,
thunder argues in denial.
With a deafening crash and blinding flash,
my heart floods with devastation.
No remedy for this violent storm,
embracing my only option.
A bolt of lightning, I rush out the door,
Slick grass dragging me to my knees.
White dress clinging, a body done breathing,
pain streams into rivers and seas.
Very nice!
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Thank you so much for reading and leaving such wonderful feedback!
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The final bid for freedom into the open wild? wow what a powerful post :O
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Thanks for expanding on this and for the wonderful praise! We come from nature and return to it. š
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Some fantastic lines in this. Great poem.
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Thank you so much for reading and for the lovely feedback. We had quite a downpour here, and it somehow led to all of this!
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I love the rain
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I used to hate it, but now I appreciate the renewal and nourishment it brings- and inspiration! Your “Gathering” poem was floating in the back of my mind while writing this!
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That’s good. I never remember what I write, so it’s nice to know someone does. š
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Absolutely, your stuff really sticks! š
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Thank you
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Aha! Good one.
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Thank you thank you, professor! š
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